Talk:The Deal/@comment-24217078-20130726112022

Well, this is something, I cannot lie. Let's figure this out on a rank.

Plot - 9.75/10 - This would have gotten a 10/10 if not for the last sentence. "Because the sniper...was my boss..." I don't entirely understand that. -.25 for that. Overall, very understandable.

Entertainment - 10/10 - This was really well written. There's really nothing I can say to that.

Overall - 9.9/10 - Amazingly Written